...END OF PRELIMINARY EXERCISE...

This is my final video for my preliminary exercise. I was not able to change the camera angles because of technical problems but I did improve the voice clarity but doing a voice over.

How I Improved My Video

I decided to make a survey to get feedback on my preliminary exercise. I used a website called Survey Monkey which gave me some interest information which I will use to improve the video. Here is some of the information put into diagrams.

This information has shown me that I need to improve the voice clarity and the angles of the shots in the class room, its also showed me that I don't need to change the music because at first i thought that the music was wrong but the survey has shown me that it isn't.

This is my first edition of the preliminary video. To help be improve this video please could you possibly do a quick survey (link below), it would be much appreciated!

Link For Survey

Script For Preliminary Exercise

(After John walks to class room, he opens the door casually) 

John: Hello Ben, you alright?

(Ben doesn't look up from his book)

Ben: Yeah good thanks, you?

John: Yes I'm fine. So do you wanna go to lunch?

(Ben looks up at this point)

Ben: Alright, if you want

John: OK, come on then

(Ben puts his books in his bags)

Ben: Two seconds!

Video

Preliminary exercise: Continuity task involving filming and editing a character opening a door, crossing a room and sitting down in a chair opposite another character, with whom she/he then exchanges a couple of lines of dialogue. This task should demonstrate match on action, shot/reverse shot and the 180-degree rule.
Main task: the titles and opening of a new fiction film, to last a maximum of two minutes.
All video and audio material must be original, produced by the candidate(s), with the exception of music or audio effects from a copyright-free source. Both preliminary and main tasks may be done individually or as a group. Maximum four members to a group.