Improvements needed:
- 'A Film By' credit needs 'George O'Reilly' in capitals
- Get ride of shot at 1:12
- Add subtly sound effect when Victor opens his eyes
- Slow motion of first drone shot
- Mute sound of shot of Victor leaving building
- redo steadicam shot of Victor with lower exposer
- Reduce volume of panning up shot of Victor
- change the music at 2:35
- redo last shot
- shorten last shot
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